Chapter 57: Hey guys!
Hey everyone,
First off—thank you.
Holy fucking shit.
Thank you so much!
I mean that from the bottom of my heart. This story? It wouldn't be what it is without all of you.
Which is why I want to take a moment to talk to you.
I've been reading your feedback. I've seen the concerns, the comments, the things that made you stop and question, "Is this MF dumb?" Some of you feel that he shouldn't have given Silco's goons the chance to drink shimmer. Others have raised concerns about the overall direction of the story. And I hear you.
And I must admit. I may have fucked up.
And it's okay, really. Sometimes there is that mental Block in your head, sometimes you're lazy, sometimes you have this goal in your mind–And you see it Clearly.
But sometimes the road towards it, is not easy. Sometimes you make mistakes, make the wrong choices and sometimes you're just lazy.
It's okay.
And that's why, after reading the comments for the last Chapter I decided to adress this issue with you all.
What should we do next?
Like, I see three paths forward, and I want your voice in this:
1- [Small Changes, Same Path] – I go back and tweak the last chapter, making sure Lukas doesn't just let them take the shimmer in the first place. This keeps the original direction intact while addressing key concerns.
2-[You fucked up, go back!!!]– Lukas arrives too late. The story shifts in a way that keeps part of canon mostly intact. His actions will still have weight, but the level of change will be different. (The first option will have some BIG changes. But I can't spoil it now.)
3-[If The reader gifts all the Powerstones, should'nt the story belong to them?]- this one is for you. If you guys believe I should take an entirely different path, go ahead and leave your comments on this chapter.
The one with the most Likes will be our way going forward!!!
This is your story as much as it is mine. Your thoughts matter.
So let me know—which path do we take?
And no matter what, thank you for being here, for reading, for caring.
Let's make this story PEAK.