Miraculous Ladybug: The Only Competent Villain

I want to take a brief pause in the story and thank you all who've read this far into the story. I've read some comments and reviews that don't seem to enjoy it to much so I'd like to ask whoever's still reading for some genuine critique, don't worry I take it well and I'd appreciate it for the betterment of the future story.

(I took some advice and im re-editing every chapter from 1 - 16, im pretty sure they have some issues im unaware of and just a bad flow of luka's own character)

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Right now i'm sitting at 3.6 stars, which I believe and its deserved I think. My writing isn't the greatest and I'm still new to writing! (2nd month of writing)

Any nit picks, Gripes, inconsistencies, issues or questions, whatever, I'm open ears and ready to respond to anything you guys have for me.

I plan to do this with all my fics i'm currently writing and if i'm being completely honest I want my story to reach a lot more viewer so your overanalyzing is extremely appreciated!