Chapter 16: Chapter 16: First Forms
"Again," Thaddeus commanded. "And this time, try not to look like you're attempting to wrestle the magic into submission. Natural flows respond to guidance, not force."
Dawn painted the abandoned courtyard in soft colors as Zeph attempted the protection weave for what felt like the hundredth time. His sensitivity traced the currents of natural magic around him, feeling how they wanted to move. The modified practice wand hummed in his hand, more conduit than tool.
"Focus on the layering," Raven suggested from where she watched. "Like weaving a cloth from flows of power."
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Status Check:
[Location: Training Area]
[Security: Maintained]
[Spell Focus: Protection Weave]
[Progress: Developing]
[Thaddeus's Patience: Waning]
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Zeph took a deep breath, letting his awareness expand. Instead of forcing a shield into existence like corporate magic taught, he felt for the natural defensive currents that already existed in the air. They were there, subtle but present – flows of magic that naturally deflected force and preserved harmony.
Slowly, carefully, he began to gather these currents. His wand moved in smooth arcs, not the rigid geometries of corporate forms but patterns that felt right to his sensitivity. Power responded, flowing like water finding its natural course. The first layer formed – a shimmer in the air that bent light slightly.
"Better," Thaddeus admitted grudgingly. "Now add the second layer before the first destabilizes. And do try to maintain some semblance of proper magical form while you work."
The second layer was trickier. While maintaining the outer weave, Zeph had to gather a different type of flow – currents that naturally absorbed and dispersed energy. His sensitivity guided him as he wove these new flows through the first layer, creating a lattice of interlocked power.
"There," he said as the weave stabilized. The shield wasn't visible except as a subtle distortion in the air, but his sensitivity could feel its strength. Unlike corporate shields with their rigid crystalline structures, this one moved and flexed like a living thing.
"Crude but functional," Thaddeus assessed. "Raven, test it. Nothing too strong – we don't want to attract corporate attention."
Raven raised her premium wand, but Zeph's sensitivity detected how she was actually channeling true magic beneath the corporate facade. A bolt of pure force shot toward his shield – not enough to trigger monitoring systems, but a real test of his weave.
The protection pattern caught the attack, not by blocking it like a wall but by guiding the force around and away. Natural flows absorbed and redirected the energy, making it part of their existing patterns. Zeph felt the whole process through his sensitivity, understanding for the first time how true defensive magic was supposed to work.
"Interesting," Raven said, launching another careful attack. "It's adapting to each hit. Corporate shields just absorb force until they break, but this..."
"Is actually working with the natural order instead of against it," Thaddeus finished. "Though his execution still needs considerable work. The third layer should be energy conversion, not just deflection."
Zeph nodded, maintaining the existing weave while feeling for a new set of flows. These were more subtle – currents that naturally transformed one type of energy into another. As he wove them into his shield, the whole pattern shifted. Now incoming force wouldn't just be deflected; it would be changed into harmless light and heat.
"Watch the efficiency," Thaddeus advised as Raven tested the enhanced shield. "Natural flows do most of the work if you let them. You're still trying too hard to control every aspect."
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Shield Analysis:
[Layer 1: Force Deflection]
[Layer 2: Energy Absorption]
[Layer 3: Power Conversion]
[Stability: 84%]
[Efficiency: Improving]
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Zeph relaxed his grip on the flows, trusting his sensitivity more than his conscious control. The shield responded immediately, its patterns becoming more elegant and natural. When Raven's next test bolt hit, the weave transformed it into a brief flash of aurora-like light.
"Now that," Thaddeus said with unusual approval, "is beginning to look like proper magical technique. Though your power distribution could still use work. And your stance is atrocious."
"The conversion effect is beautiful," Raven noted, sending another careful bolt. This one became a spiral of soft luminescence as the shield transformed its energy. "Grandmother never showed me this variation."
"Because most practitioners lack the sensitivity to maintain proper energy transformation matrices," Thaddeus explained. "They try to force the conversion instead of letting natural flows handle it. Speaking of which – Zeph, your second layer is starting to drift. Correct it before the whole pattern destabilizes."
Zeph felt it too – the absorption currents were losing their perfect alignment with the deflection layer. He made a small adjustment, not by forcing the flows but by encouraging them back into harmony. The shield's pattern stabilized, becoming if anything stronger than before.
"Better," Thaddeus admitted. "Though you're still relying too much on conscious control. True magic should feel as natural as breathing. Again, from the beginning. And this time, try to look less like you're solving complex equations in your head while you work."
As Zeph let the shield dissolve back into natural flows, he felt something click in his understanding. Corporate magic treated protection as something imposed on reality – artificial barriers created through forced power. But true magic just enhanced what was already there, working with reality's existing defenses.
"The natural flows are already protecting everything," he said slowly. "We're just... helping them do it more effectively."
"Finally, a glimmer of actual comprehension," Thaddeus said. "Though your metaphysical understanding still needs considerable work. Now, let's see if you can maintain proper form while creating a multi-layered shield under pressure. Raven?"
She nodded, gathering power for a more complex series of tests. Her magic moved with practiced grace, but Zeph noticed she was watching his shield pattern with intense interest. The way natural flows handled defense was clearly different from what she'd learned, even from her grandmother.
"Remember," Thaddeus advised as Zeph began weaving the protection pattern again, "you're not creating something new. You're working with currents that have existed since magic first flowed through reality. Your sensitivity is finally starting to understand this. Now if only your technique could keep up with your awareness..."
The lesson continued as morning light strengthened. Each repetition taught Zeph more about how natural flows maintained harmony, how true magic enhanced rather than imposed. His sensitivity grew sharper, more attuned to the subtle currents around him.
And if sometimes Raven's attacks seemed to lack their usual perfect precision when his shield transformed them into dancing lights, well... Thaddeus had criticism enough for both of them.