Chapter 5: Chapter Six: A Father's Pride, A Mother's Heart
Naomi's cries of agony gave way to a sudden, sharp wail. The midwife raised the infant high, his body slick with birth, his lungs drawing in the breath of life for the first time.
"It's a son!" the elder midwife proclaimed.
Elimelech burst through the door as if the words had summoned him. His eyes were wide with wonder as he knelt by Naomi's side, his hand trembling as it reached to touch the tiny fist. The baby's cries filled the room with a triumphant song of new life.
Naomi, her voice hoarse, whispered, "Mahlon. Jehovah's gift. Endures."
The household erupted into praises of God. The elder midwife held the child aloft, declaring, "May this son grow in strength and wisdom, and may he be a blessing to his house!"
Eight days later, Elimelech and Naomi carried their son to the gathering of elders. In keeping with the Law, a small offering of turtledoves was presented. Mahlon was cradled in his father's arms as the priest pronounced the blessing:
"Jehovah, God of Abraham, Isaac, and Jacob, bless this child. May he walk in Your ways all the days of his life."
The priest drew the knife with swift precision, and the covenant of circumcision was made. Naomi felt her heart constrict as Mahlon cried out, but she stood strong, her eyes fixed on Elimelech's steady countenance.
When they returned home, there was a simple feast. Neighbors and kin gathered, their faces shining bright with joy. Tirzah, Zilpah, and Shua prepared figs and honey, while Elimelech recounted stories of his youth. Naomi, felt weary yet filled with peace, held her son close to her chest as he drifted quietly into sleep.
Four Years had gone by, the sun hung high, its light casting long shadows over Bethlehem. Naomi swept through the courtyard, her shawl clutched in one hand, calling out, "Mahlon! Mahlon, where are you?....Mahlon"
Her voice echoed, unanswered. She had searched every corner of the house, under the fig tree, by the well, and even in the neighbors' courtyards. The panic in her heart grew as her mind raced with possibilities.
She stepped outside, her eyes scanning the fields in the distance. The road leading home shimmered under the heat, but then—there! Two figures appeared: a man with broad shoulders and a boy perched atop them, a sunbeam of laughter and curls.
Naomi felt the tension in her chest ease up, a cry of relief rising to her lips. She took a step forward, her mouth opening to call his name—but her world spun, and before she could catch her breath, darkness quickly claimed her.
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The sun hung low in the sky, casting long, golden shadows across the fields. The air was thick with the scent of barley and dust. The rhythmic swish of sickles echoed as workers harvested the grain, their sweat glistening under the afternoon heat. Elimelech moved among them, his eyes keen, observing each swing and the neat bundles of stalks tied in clusters.
His hand rested lightly on a scroll tucked under his arm, a record of yields and distribution for the storehouse. As he inspected the rows, a ripple of laughter drew his attention.
Curious, he followed the sound, rounding a corner where the workers gathered in a loose circle. They weren't idling —no— far from it. Amid the neatly stacked sheaves stood a small boy, his dark curls damp with exertion, a playful smile tugging at his lips.
"Why do you bind them so tightly?" Mahlon asked, pointing at a bundle of barley.
One of the men chuckled, wiping his brow. "To keep the grain from spilling. A loose bundle is as good as wasted labor."
Mahlon furrowed his brow. "But wouldn't that make it harder to thresh?"
Another worker, a wiry man with sun-hardened skin, nodded approvingly. "Sharp mind, this one. You will make a fine master of the field one day."
The boy grinned, undeterred. "When will I learn to swing a sickle?"
"You'll need arms like mine for that," the man teased, flexing his sinewy muscles.
Mahlon giggled. "I'll grow them soon enough!"
Elimelech approached quietly, his shadow falling over the group. His voice, calm and steady, carried authority. "Does your mother know where you are, my son?"
The boy's laughter faded as he turned to face his father. "No, Abba. I… I wanted to learn."
The workers exchanged glances, a few smiling knowingly. "A curious boy is never a burden," one murmured. "He asks questions like a man two times his age."
Elimelech knelt beside his son, placing a firm hand on his shoulder. His expression softened, though his tone remained even. "Curiosity is good. But wisdom begins with obedience." He lifted the boy onto his shoulders, settling him there as if he weighed nothing. "Come. Your mother will want to see you."
As they walked, the boy's small hands gripped his father's brow. "Will you teach me tomorrow?"
"Perhaps," Elimelech replied, a smile playing at the corners of his lips.
Behind them, soft whispers followed like the breeze.
"His father's pride is plain, even if he hides it."
"A boy who loves the land, just like Elimelech."
"Or perhaps he's just using the lad as an excuse to go home early."
Elimelech didn't turn back. His heart, though heavy with the weight of famine and duty, swelled with quiet joy.
From a distance, the house came into view. Naomi stood at the entrance, her figure framed by the sun's dying light. Her head turned sharply at the sight of them. Even from afar, Elimelech could see the worry in her eyes, the relief that softened her brow when their gazes met.
He felt the boy shift on his shoulders, ready to leap down. But before he could lower him, Naomi swayed, her hands grasping at the air as if to catch hold of something unseen.
"Naomi!"
She crumpled like a sheaf of wheat, her body yielding to the ground.
"Abba—" Mahlon's voice trembled.
Elimelech's heart raced as he ran.